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Nurse
Posts : 31
Join date : 2009-06-14
Age : 32
Location : The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls, Germany
| Subject: Oh sweet Poseidon  Mon Jun 15, 2009 11:51 pm | |
| Oh sweet Poseidon, won't you take me away to places I only dreamed of seeing?
I'll let your waves embrace me and allow them to carry me farther out to sea.
I'm without ship but I am not without will.
Let me find solace in the aquatic life skimming the surface of the dark blue water.
I'll follow you to any place you choose to take me.
My mind won't stray from the currents lapping at my pale, emotionless face.
I'll hold close to the gentle whales that live in the sea, laying back to watch the stars. | |
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Marcus Kane
Posts : 80
Join date : 2007-12-22
| | Subject: Re: Oh sweet Poseidon Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| Very well written..I like it:) | |
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Nurse
Posts : 31
Join date : 2009-06-14
Age : 32
Location : The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls, Germany
| | Subject: Re: Oh sweet Poseidon Mon Jun 22, 2009 5:58 pm | |
| - Marcus Kane wrote:
- Very well written..I like it:)
Thank you, m'dear. (: At least here I get some FAIR feedback. | |
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Marcus Kane
Posts : 80
Join date : 2007-12-22
| | Subject: Re: Oh sweet Poseidon Tue Jun 23, 2009 11:43 pm | |
| Well you are most welcome:) As I've told you before..you are a very talented writer. One that actually enjoys the craft...not all that many left anymore!
Anyways..I suppose its my turn....
Lyrics from the new CD " Room 13" out hopefully in OCT if we can get our asses in gear!
[center]GONE
Flickering shadows of light slowly fades
In a room where the curtains are drawn..
Haunted by visions of faith long betrayed
in a world where I never belonged
Can you imagine this pain that I feel
Its been building inside for so long
They say in time even old wounds will heal
But their memories will never be gone...
On the walls of this tomb I have written my fate
line by line, every word there to read..
A doorway to nowhere is all that awaits
and a walk into eternity...
Come let me show you this rage that I feel
Come and bathe in the eye of the storm
One moment of pain, all will cease to be real
But my memory will never be gone... | |
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Nurse
Posts : 31
Join date : 2009-06-14
Age : 32
Location : The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls, Germany
| | Subject: Re: Oh sweet Poseidon Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:48 am | |
| - Marcus Kane wrote:
- Well you are most welcome:) As I've told you before..you are a very talented writer. One that actually enjoys the craft...not all that many left anymore!
Anyways..I suppose its my turn....
Lyrics from the new CD " Room 13" out hopefully in OCT if we can get our asses in gear!
[center]GONE
Flickering shadows of light slowly fades
In a room where the curtains are drawn..
Haunted by visions of faith long betrayed
in a world where I never belonged
Can you imagine this pain that I feel
Its been building inside for so long
They say in time even old wounds will heal
But their memories will never be gone...
On the walls of this tomb I have written my fate
line by line, every word there to read..
A doorway to nowhere is all that awaits
and a walk into eternity...
Come let me show you this rage that I feel
Come and bathe in the eye of the storm
One moment of pain, all will cease to be real
But my memory will never be gone... Thank you, it's nice things such as that which keeps me going(: Oh wow, your song? It's amazing...I don't know any other word to describe it. | |
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C'iana DeCampli
Posts : 19
Join date : 2009-06-14
Age : 98
Location : House of Pa'ria, NJ
| | Subject: Nurse and Marcus... Thu Jun 25, 2009 3:25 am | |
| [left]Wow.... Nurse that's purely beautiful imagery... You have always been a good writter... Don't let the haters upset you... They're jealous, love.... You are a jewel just waiting to be found... Keep on going and follow what your heart tells you...  Marucs... I can't say more of who much your writting moves me... I'm so happy the new project is coming along.... I'm very excited.... I played your last album to death... Poor cd case is craked from going to the house to the car to friend's houses to my mom's place then on the computer, etc.... It's just nice to know that there are artists out there that play and write their own works still and that it comes from deep inside... Catch up with you guys later.... As ever, C'iana | |
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Nurse
Posts : 31
Join date : 2009-06-14
Age : 32
Location : The Asylum for Wayward Victorian Girls, Germany
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Marcus Kane
Posts : 80
Join date : 2007-12-22
| | Subject: Re: Oh sweet Poseidon Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:12 pm | |
| Well well...now we have TWO very talented writers on this board...and one dude who admittedly just writes what the voices in my head TELL me to:) lol Anyways..thanks for the kind feedback...i'll pass it on to the little voices  | |
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